could you help me with essay?

0hi all. my name is ko and 00this is my essay00 .02br
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00Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?02br
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00Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.02br
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00In our life, we’ve encountered a lot of respectable people that we should admire the way they live. And it’s supposed that parents are the best and respectful teachers due to the fact that they are the closest people that can easily approach their children. On top of that the children undoubtedly absorb lessons from their parents. However, parents are not the best teacher on account of their quality that has bad influence on their children.02br
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00Firstly, some parents are not properly educated or don’t care anything about their children. They could be so neglectful that the children can’t learn important things to live our life such as how to get along and communicate with others. Providing that they are not able to learn these vital things for life, they will have hard time and could blame their parents for giving their birth when their age reaches the age of adult.02br
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00Secondly, In modern society, the speed of the change is too fast for people to keep up with it. And this fact gives rise for parents to the lack of time to spend with their children. It’s been so long that money became the most priority for them. In comparison with money, children have left behind from their interest since they believe that money can do everything including education. You could imagine that the kid who are alone in their room. A child problem such as taking drugs and drinking can be put down to feeling cut off.02br
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00Finally, I’m in the opinion that those parents who had committed crime such as bumping off or stealing someone’s belongings are not eligible to teach their children. Assuming that they spoke abusive language and beat up their children. Would you believe that you just let them teach their son and daughter? I don’t think that they can’t be grown with normal life that their friends have for sure.02br
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00To sum up, for all these reasons, I have come to conclusion that parents are not the best teacher. Some parents are not properly qualified to teach their children because they have some problems such as lack of time to spend with their children, their personality and the background of what they’ve done wrong in their life.02br
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00i have difficulty writing essay. sometimes it makes me feel frustrated. but im going to stick at this unitil i can have good command in englsih. and02br
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00i wish i had fren who are interested in korean. if you should want to learn it you could add my msn id 01i01font00<email address removed by moderator. You can add it to your profile if you register.>02font02i00. i will be willing to help with your korean.02br
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00thank you for your help.^^02br
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