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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Could you help me with a grammar check for one sentence?

hi, guys!

English is my second language, so I wanted to ask whether this sentence sounds okay (or do I need to make any changes Grammar-wise):

We kindly request to provide the Court until December 1, 2014 with information about job relationships and paid taxes, as well as about benefits received from December 23 up to the day when such information is requested in the United Kingdom of the defendant NAME, SURNAME

I did not know where to put that "until December 1, 2014". Does this looks okay?

Many thanks!
  

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We request that before December 1, 2014, you kindly provide the Court with information on job relationships and paid taxes as well as on benefits received from December 23 to the date that such information is requested of the defendant NAME, SURNAME in the United Kingdom

— Mister Micawber

  • We request that before December 1, 2014, you kindly provide the Court with information on job relationships and paid taxes as well as on benefits received from December 23 to the date that such information is requested of the defendant NAME, SURNAME in the United Kingdom
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We request that before December 1, 2014, you kindly provide the Court with information on job relationships and paid taxes as well as on benefits received from December 23 to the date that such information is requested of the defendant NAME, SURNAME in the United Kingdom
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