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Due to the increasing population and the increasing number of vehicles in recent years, congestion occurs at the intersections and conventional (fixed-cycle) traffic lights, in other words, the traffic control systems with fixed green and red periods are not enough to eliminate the congestion in the traffic.
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Mehmet Hokdelb Is it correct? No. It should be two sentences, for one thing.
- Mehmet Hokdelb Is it correct?
- No.
- It should be two sentences, for one thing.
- There is a problem of sense, too.
- Maybe, changing as little as possible: "Due to the increase in the population and the consequent increase in the number of vehicles in recent years, traffic congestion is occurring, especially at intersections with conventional (fixed-cycle) traffic lights.
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Mehmet HokdelbIs it correct?
No. It should be two sentences, for one thing. There is a problem of sense, too. Maybe, changing as little as possible:
"Due to the increase in the population and the consequent increase in the number of vehicles in recent years, traffic congestion is occurring, especially at intersections with conventional (fixed-cycle) t
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