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The chart shows the problems people have when they move to a new country how the difficulties vary according to people’s age.

The biggest problem for the middle age group is sorting out healthcare with nearly 37 percent. This is higher than the youngest age group with 36 percent and 33 percent for the oldest age group. The middle age group also have the most problems related to money with 35 percent, compared with 34 percent for the youngest age group and 29 percent for the oldest age group.

Finding schools for the children causes some trouble for people aged 35 – 54, at 19 percent. In comparison, the oldest age group finds this easier with the percentage in this field is much lower, at 2 percent.

In general, all age group experience the same problem to some extent, but the percentage of people aged 35 – 54 has to deal with the most problems.