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Demart28 Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

could you help me please to correct my covering letter?


Dear Sir/Madam,






I refer to the position of Outreach Worker advertised in Peoplemedia website.

This position has a definite appeal for me, both on a personal and career basis.


I have finished my degree in International Relations in Poland. I am currently a Supervisor in the restaurant in London and I am responsible for assisting the restaurant within company.


During my study I have worked as a Senior Consultant in Litigation Department, where I was responsible for cooperation with prosecutors and police. At the same time I have worked as a volunteer for the Charity Bank, which provide the most poor polish family with food. This experience has helped me to develop good working relationship with both: other organizations and companies and also with customers. I understood, that I wish to expand my career further, into the humanitarian role.


First time I have heard about Refuge in the UK during my study and I was very impressed how effectively protect women and children from domestic violence. Not only because I’m a woman and Refuge is concentrated about female help but because I believe that everybody should enjoy the life without abuse.


I believe that my job experience, ability to work in difficult environment, being self motivated and general ability to work on both as a part of the team and individual are accurate for this position. I can also communicate fluently in Polish and English and understand some of the Czech and Slovak languages, which may be very useful for this role.


Thank you for your consideration of my application. Please contact me should you require any further information,

Yours sincerely
  

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Dear Sir/Madam, I refer to the position of Outreach Worker advertised in Peoplemedia website. I am most interested in this position, on both a professional and personal basis and am hereby applying for the job. During my stud ies I have worked as a Senior Consultant in a Litigation Department, where I was responsible for cooperation with prosecutors and police.

  • Dear Sir/Madam, I refer to the position of Outreach Worker advertised in Peoplemedia website.
  • I am most interested in this position, on both a professional and personal basis and am hereby applying for the job.
  • During my stud ies I have worked as a Senior Consultant in a Litigation Department, where I was responsible for cooperation with prosecutors and police.
  • At the same time I have worked as a volunteer for the Charity Bank in Poland , which provide s the most poor polish poorest families family with food.
  • This experience has helped me to develop good working relationship s with both other organizations and companies and also with customers.
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I refer to the position of Outreach Worker advertised in Peoplemedia website. I am most interested in this position, on both a professional and personal basis and am hereby applying for the job.
I am a graduate in International Relations from [name of university] in Poland.During my studies I have worked as a Senior Consultant in a Litigation Departmen
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thanks a lot
it was very helpful
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Just one point - which applies also to your post about applying for jobs. Generally advertisements for jobs give the name of the contact person. It is there to be used - use it! And end with Yours sincerely.

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