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00Hello, do you mind help me correcting the text below and give me, if possible,some piece of advice to improve my writing (which I know it's still poor), please?02br
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00Thanks a lot, Chiara Ps: I don't know if I answer correcty to the task: "place where you live", I thought the town where I live, but I'm not sure it's correct.02br
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00Think about the place where you live, work or study. Is there a leisure facility which you think it needs? An art gallery? A sports centre?...02br
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00-say what leisure facility you would like and why you think it is needed02br
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00-describe in detail what you would like the leisure facility to provide02br
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00-explain which groups of peopl in your community would most benefit form this facility.02br
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00The town of Florence is very famous in the world for its monuments and museums. But for people living here it is very difficult to enjoy their spare time in town.02br
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00It's easy to see it during the week-ends when, a part the ordes of turists and new migrants crowding the narrow streets of the centre, Florence seems a ghost town.02br
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00I think a nice and modern Art Centre would be a great help to improve the quality of all citizens' spare time. 02br
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00Firstly it should provide all kind of good international exhibitions from painting to photography, from sculpture to any kind of contemporary art.02br
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00Secondly it should organise other type of cultural events, as music concerts and movies, cultural conferences and meetings.02br
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00Thirdly it should provide workshops, either for adults and for children, who want to learn new arts.02br
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00Finally the Art Centre should have a bookshop, a coffeshop and hopefully a park, open seven days a week, for all those people who want to go and read a newspaper, have a good slice of cake, or just meet a friend.02br
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00The birth of an Art Centre in town would definitely bring a breath of fresh air for all groups of the community: adults, children and elder people, either Italian and foreinger, who would find a new exciting place to go and meet new friends.02br
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