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the charts show the change in the amount of water used for agriculture, industry, homes, and water consumption in Brazil and congo in 2000.

It is clear that the total amount of water needs worldwide rose significantly over a period of 100 years and that agriculture accounted for the most. we ca also see that water need in Brazil was much more times in Congo.

In 1990, Around 500 km3 of water used for agriculture, while the figures for industry and domestic were just one fifth of that amount. By 200, the global water use for Agriculture had risen to almost 3000 km3. the figures for Industrial use and domestic use were around 1500 km3 and 500 km3 respectively.

Both population and Irrigated land in Brazil were larger than in congo, 176 million people compared to 5.2 million people. 26 500 km2 was the land needing to be watered while the number in congo was only 100 km2. As a result, water consumption per person in Brazil, 359 m3 was higher more times than in Congo, at only 8m3