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Eminguyen Posted 4 years ago
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Could you help me check and grade my ielts writing task 2?

It is believed that people should appreciate the future over the present and should always live towards it. Although I agree that lives may become burdensome without passions, ambitions, and appropriate schedules, I tend to think that the values the present brings to us are incomparable.

To commence with, it is crucial to be farsighted because the future is unpredictable. This means that every individual stands a high chance of facing challenges throughout their lifetime, and therefore making a meticulously-outlined plan acts as a roadmap and guidance for life as it helps to minimize unexpected consequences. This can be perfectly exemplified by success stories such as Bill Gates or Elon Musk who have efficient marketing strategies being planned even years before launching their new products into the market. Additionally, we, as human beings, not only live for ourselves but also have a responsibility to take care of our birth-givers and offspring. The preparation for their retirement and adulthood is reflected in the expenses including tuition fees, medical care, and other recreational activities. Without a contingency plan, we may not feel a sense of purpose and direction, having no goals and dreams to strive toward as a result.

However, people should not underestimate the present because they only live once in a lifetime. If they place too much emphasis on planning for the forthcoming time by sacrificing all of their time working, it is possible that they miss out on many important life events each passing moment. A husband, for instance, may unintentionally forget his wife’s birthday, or a child may take for granted their elderly parent’s health, and they end up regretting those simple but precious things in life when it is too late. One more thing is that everyone is entitled to enjoy every moment of life, so apart from making a living, it is of paramount importance for people to be self-loved and live their life to the fullest for the moment being. Obsession with the future may, therefore, deprive our feeling of pleasure.

To conclude, due to the aforementioned reasons, I believe that it is vital for one to ensure his living standards. At the same time, he should also develop sensible strategies for the future in case of an emergency.

  

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1. We cannot help you if we do not have the task instructions. Post them in a reply or comment.

You wrote over 370 words. The minimum is 250. You will not lose points for writing more; however, longer essays generally do not get high band scores. And there are many reasons for this.

First, the longer the essay, the more chances you have to make errors, and you will lo

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I'm so sorry! I'm not used to using the forum. I remember putting the task requirement somewhere. Here it is:

An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than the present. Do you agree or disagree?

Thank you in advance for helping me!

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