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With the development of media and entertainment, the new generation of television entrepreneur has entered into public view. The entrepreneur who shows on the television program and their personality was construct by the media as expert, investor and presenter; they are the celebrity entrepreneur or the television entrepreneur (Boyle & Kelly, 2011). Certainly, the celebrity entrepreneur is popular context around the world, Steve Jobs, the Kardashian family and Sicong Wang could be the representative examples.

In particular, this journal is going to investigate the interesting person, Sicong Wang. Sicong Wang is an entrepreneur, but he got another identity, the son of Chinese tycoon. He does not sale any products like Steve Jobs and not famous through the reality TV program as same as the Kardashian family, he has become well-know because of the negative comment about gossip on the Weibo. According to Goodman & Barnes (2011) suggested, the business ‘star’ could do something ‘ordinary’ as ‘extra-ordinary’ individual. There is combination between ordinary and extraordinary existing in Sicong’s identity, because Sicong comment discuss the daily entertainment gossip like what normal people do, but he can affect the public opinion and cause the concern of media. After that, he have numerous celebrity friends and invested a reality online live program, Hello Goddess. This reality show is similar with Dragons’ Den, Sicong as the investor and judge seat under the stage. If the participant won the competition, he will invest the winner to be a real singer or actor. Even this program is not popular, but he develop his celebrity identity and build own brand.

The English is my second language and my tutor always told me for proof reading. But there is still many grammar mistake...