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Lucas21c Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Could you help me?

Could you check whether the following sentences sound fine?
Thank you.

When I try to run your software, it suddenly doesn't work and close automatically, returning me to the main screen. So, I would like to revoke my credit card payment. Please note that you have no right to charge me for your program or refunding process. Thank you.
  

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You are being entirely too rude in English. When I try to run your software, it suddenly stops working and closes automatically, returning me to the main screen, so I would like to request a full refund. Thank you.

— Mister Micawber

  • You are being entirely too rude in English.
  • When I try to run your software, it suddenly stops working and closes automatically, returning me to the main screen, so I would like to request a full refund.
  • Thank you.
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You are being entirely too rude in English.

When I try to run your software, it suddenly stops working and closes automatically, returning me to the main screen, so I would like to request a full refund. Thank you.
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Thank you very much for your help, Mr.Micawber.
By the way, in the respect of grammar, if there is no comma between 'automatically' and 'returning,' the sentence is wrong?
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lucas21cif there is no comma between 'automatically' and 'returning,' the sentence is wrong?
Wrong, yes.
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