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Lucas21c Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
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Could you tell me whether the following sentence is right?
If not, please correct it, but do not divide it into several sentences.
(I hope you will rewrite it as one sentence as I did because I want to learn the structure.)
Beppe Grillo, a famous comedian, politican, who leads the third biggest party in Italy and carrys on 'Movimento 5 Stelle' campaign, insists that Italy should secede from Eurozone, arguing it it impossilbe to reform Italy without its own national currency.
If not, please correct it, but do not divide it into several sentences.
(I hope you will rewrite it as one sentence as I did because I want to learn the structure.)
Beppe Grillo, a famous comedian, politican, who leads the third biggest party in Italy and carrys on 'Movimento 5 Stelle' campaign, insists that Italy should secede from Eurozone, arguing it it impossilbe to reform Italy without its own national currency.
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lucas21c Beppe Grillo, a famous comedian, politican, who leads the third biggest party in Italy and carrys on the 'Movimento 5 Stelle' campaign, insists that Italy should secede from the Eurozone, arguing it it impossilbe to reform Italy without its own national currency. I would look fir a more appropriate verb than carry on'. for a named campaign.
- lucas21c Beppe Grillo, a famous comedian, politican, who leads the third biggest party in Italy and carrys on the 'Movimento 5 Stelle' campaign, insists that Italy should secede from the Eurozone, arguing it it impossilbe to reform Italy without its own national currency.
- I would look fir a more appropriate verb than carry on'.
- for a named campaign.
- The part I have highlighted is awkward.
- '?
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lucas21cBeppe Grillo, a famous comedian, politican, who leads the third biggest party in Italy and carrys on the 'Movimento 5 Stelle' campaign, insists that Italy should secede from the Eurozone, arguing it it impossilbe to reform Italy without its own national currency.I have underlined a sp
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1. "Beppe Grillo, a famous comedian, politician..." is no good? Do I have to make it more clear, for example, "Beppe Grillo, a famous comedian and politician, who...?"
2. Does the one corrected by you sound natural as it is? Or, is it better to divide it into several sentences?
2. Does the one corrected by you sound natural as it is? Or, is it better to divide it into several sentences?
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