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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
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I am not sure whether the following sentences sounds fine.
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What the notorius criminal had done for 2 years after his jailbreak stunned us/ the public. (which wording is better?) It seems to show how many basic/fundamental safety problems we have in our societies.
Could you check it?
Thank you.
What the notorius criminal had done for 2 years after his jailbreak stunned us/ the public. (which wording is better?) It seems to show how many basic/fundamental safety problems we have in our societies.
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lucas21c What the noto riou s criminal had done for 2 years after his jailbreak stunned t he public. (which wording is better? It seems to show how many fundamental safety problems we have in our societies.
- lucas21c What the noto riou s criminal had done for 2 years after his jailbreak stunned t he public.
- (which wording is better?
- It seems to show how many fundamental safety problems we have in our societies.
- The green is the correction.
- Hi lucas21c, I think it is a matter of word choice, intention, tone projection and perspective.
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lucas21cWhat the notorious criminal had done for 2 years after his jailbreak stunned the public. (which wording is better? It seems to show how many fundamental safety problems we have in our societies. The green is the correction.
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