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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
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When Chuseok is coming, all department stores in Korea fight for the sale of Chuseok presents. In Japan, the same thing happens at their traditional holiday called Ochuugen. However, their cultures are different from each other in terms of contents of presents. Presents which Japanese people usually exchange cost from 3,000 yen to 5,000 yen but those that Korean people buy are sometimes up to 30,000 yen.
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When Chuseok is coming, all department stores in Korea fight for the sale of Chuseok presents. In Japan, the same thing happens at their traditional holiday called Ochuugen. However, their cultures are different from each other in terms of contents of presents. Presents which Japanese people usually exchange cost from 3,000 yen to 5,000 yen but those that Korean people buy are sometimes up to 30,000 yen.
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As Chuseok approaches, Korea's department stores all compete in the sale of Chuseok gifts. This also occurs in Japan at their traditional Ochugen and Oseibo holidays. However, the two cultures have different spending habits: the Japanese usually exchange gifts costing from 3,000 to 5,000 yen, while Koreans sometimes spend up to 30,000 yen.
- As Chuseok approaches, Korea's department stores all compete in the sale of Chuseok gifts.
- This also occurs in Japan at their traditional Ochugen and Oseibo holidays.
- However, the two cultures have different spending habits: the Japanese usually exchange gifts costing from 3,000 to 5,000 yen, while Koreans sometimes spend up to 30,000 yen.
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As Chuseok approaches, Korea's department stores all compete in the sale of Chuseok gifts. This also occurs in Japan at their traditional Ochugen and Oseibo holidays. However, the two cultures have different spending habits: the Japanese usually exchange gifts costing from 3,000 to 5,000 yen, while Koreans sometimes spend up to 30,000 yen.
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