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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
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Could you tell me whether the folloing sentence sounds natural?
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Neoliberal economists are optimistic about a free market and favors deregulation whereas Keynsian economists are negative about an unfettered market and believes deregulation has not worked.
  

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Hi, Could you tell me whether the folloing sentence sounds natural? Thank you. Neoliberal economists are optimistic about a free market and favors deregulation whereas Keynsian economists are negative about an unfettered market and believes deregulation has not worked.

— Clive

  • Hi, Could you tell me whether the folloing sentence sounds natural?
  • Thank you.
  • Neoliberal economists are optimistic about a free market and favors deregulation whereas Keynsian economists are negative about an unfettered market and believes deregulation has not worked.
  • Fine, but with a few small edits.
  • Neoliberal economists are optimistic about a free market and favor deregulation , comma whereas Keyn e sian economists are negative about an unfettered market and believe deregulation has not worked.
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Hi,
Could you tell me whether the folloing sentence sounds natural?
Thank you.

Neoliberal economists are optimistic about a free market and favors deregulation whereas Keynsian economists are negative about an unfettered market and believes deregulation has not worked.

Fine, but with a few small edits.
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I think it's more natural like this:

Neoliberal economists are optimistic about free markets and favor deregulation, whereas Keynsian economists are negative about unfettered markets and believe deregulation has not worked.

CJ
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