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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Could you help me?
Could you check whether the following sentence is fine?
Thank you.
Harvard University replaced three big hinged doors made 36 years ago for only one disabled student with automatic doors after 2 weeks work.
Thank you.
Harvard University replaced three big hinged doors made 36 years ago for only one disabled student with automatic doors after 2 weeks work.
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I have never met a student who was equipped with automatic doors! You need to move some phrases around to rectify this problem. I suggest moving "for only one disabled student" to the end.
- I have never met a student who was equipped with automatic doors!
- You need to move some phrases around to rectify this problem.
- I suggest moving "for only one disabled student" to the end.
- CJ
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I have never met a student who was equipped with automatic doors!
You need to move some phrases around to rectify this problem.
I suggest moving "for only one disabled student" to the end.
You need to move some phrases around to rectify this problem.
I suggest moving "for only one disabled student" to the end.
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Harvard University replaced three big hinged doors with automatic doors for only one disabled student after 2 weeks work. The doors were made 36 years ago.
If the above sentences are fine, could you tell me how I can make the two sentence into one?
If the above sentences are fine, could you tell me how I can make the two sentence into one?
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There is more than one way to do that.
Harvard University replaced three big hinged doors which were made 36 years ago with automatic doors for only one disabled student after two weeks work.
Harvard University replaced three big hinged doors made 36 years ago with automatic doors for only one disabled student after two weeks work.
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Harvard University replaced three big hinged doors which were made 36 years ago with automatic doors for only one disabled student after two weeks work.
Harvard University replaced three big hinged doors made 36 years ago with automatic doors for only one disabled student after two weeks work.
Harvard University replaced three big, thirty-six
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