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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
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Could you help me?

I wrote the following sentence and hope that it sounds humorous and natural.
Could you check it whether it is fine as I intend?
Thank you.

If human are gone, it means that cockroaches lose their closest friends who provide them with food without paying and houses not affected by mortgage loan, but anyway they will survive as they have lasted for 350 million years.
  

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If humans are gone, it means that cockroaches lose their closest friends , who provide them with free food and mortgage-free houses ; but anyway they will survive , as they have already lasted for 350 million years.

  • If humans are gone, it means that cockroaches lose their closest friends , who provide them with free food and mortgage-free houses ; but anyway they will survive , as they have already lasted for 350 million years.
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If humans are gone, it means that cockroaches lose their closest friends, who provide them with free food and mortgage-free houses; but anyway they will survive, as they have already lasted for 350 million years.

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