Would - wasn't used appropriately in both of the sentences in my opinion. If your intent of using "would" was to express a past tense context, it doesn't work that way. # 1 is unidiomatic.
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lucas21cCould you tell me whatarethe differences are between the following sentences in terms of meaning?
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1. When I would bring the business attorney what I thought was a finished piece of work, he would read it quietly and take out his pen