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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Could you help correct/rephrase this paragraph

Please help correcting errors or repharse or reword the below paragrahp I'm using in my CV under About me section:
"Even though I’ve already spent many years in the IT development industry, I am still passionate about it, always interested to learn about new things coming in. I believe IT developers have so far made a big change in our lives, they will continue to do so and Id still like to be part of that.
Sharing knowledge is an activity that I believe causes my knowledge to strengthen, I always like to spend some of my time on contributing to forums like msdn.
In my free time you will see me either doing a tennis match or cooking one of my favorite Lebanese recipes that I’m deprived of since am abroad, or jogging around.
Not a very active person on social media...huh? Yeah, I don’t agree on virtuality when it comes to human communications, also I have enough of device connections in my life no need for more Emotion: smile"
  

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