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Lucas21c Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Could you go over my sentences?

I wonder if my following sentences are fine.

Could you go them over?

Thank you.

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1. I would drive to my home and first give the old lady who lives next door enough food to last the whole year.

2. I have already had a trial ride of that model at which you are looking.

3. She missed the school from which she had stayed away for a long time.
  

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Could you go over them? 1. I would drive hom e and first give the old lady next door enough food to last the whole year.

  • Could you go over them?
  • 1.
  • I would drive hom e and first give the old lady next door enough food to last the whole year.
  • 2.
  • I've already had a trial ride in that model you're looking at.
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Could you go over them?

1. I would drive home and first give the old lady next door enough food to last the whole year.
2. I've already had a trial ride in that model you're looking at.
3. She missed the school she'd stayed away from for a long time.
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They all sound very awkward . . . .

1. You need to give more information about when you would drive home . . . Every summer I would drive to my home . . . .

2. I have all ready had a trial ride of the modey which you are looking at.

3. She missed the school because she had stay away for a long time.
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Thanks for your answers.

By the way, the reason why I asked this question is that I want to know more about 'a relative clause'.

So, could you tell me whether "I gave the old lady who lives next door enough food to last the whole year. " is fine?

Also, if there is "which" between "school" and "she", like "She missed the school which she'd stayed away from
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So, could you tell me whether "I gave the old lady who lives next door enough food to last the whole year. " is fine?-- Yes, it is fine.

Also, if there is "which" between "school" and "she", like "She missed the school which she'd stayed away from for a long time.", is it okay?-- Yes, or 'that'.

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