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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Could you give your opinion on my reference letter.

0Could you look through the reference letter, and give you opinion on it?02br
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00Reference letter02br
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00I am writing this reference letter on behalf of [name] . I have been [name] educator for four years and a reviewer of his bachalor and master thesises.02br
00He completed his education at the [department]of the [University]. He was studying at the chair of [chair]. During his education he successfully accomplished all requirements of the master’s program of [program name]. He successfully passed all required courses (Mathematics, Physics, Economics, Computer Science), state exams on physics and mathematics, and demonstrated strong knowledge in specialization field.02br
00Bachelor thesis was devoted to analysis to the functionality of [system name] and application of its toolset for solving of the task of [task description].02br
00Master thesis was devoted to the one of the most important problem on designing of information systems for automation of the technological processes , to development of the [system name]. With work is actual for the solving of the task of aircraft industry engineering. In his work he made great contribution to the project. [name] demonstrated strong knowledge of the object-oriented designing and programming. He also demonstrated deep insight of the problem and self-dependence.02br
00Bachelor thesis and Master thesis were made with excellent performance. They close to the chair specialization and directed to solving actual applied tasks in the area of information technologies and automation of technological processes. 02br
00[name] has outstanding organizational skills. He is able to complete multiple tasks despite deadline pressure successfully. He has consistently demonstrated an ability to rise to any challenge that he must face.02br
00I can also mention his leader skills. During his bachelor degree, he was a class monitor and a member of council of students.02br
00Taking all these things into account, I believe that [name] is excellent candidate for your program. 02br
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00Thanks for your help.0-
  

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0Hi, I've made some corrections in bold and highlighted some other problems for you to fix. Some parts I could not really understand. 02br 02br 00I am writing this reference letter 01b 00regarding02b 00 [name] .

  • 0Hi, I've made some corrections in bold and highlighted some other problems for you to fix.
  • Some parts I could not really understand.
  • 02br 02br 00I am writing this reference letter 01b 00regarding02b 00 [name] .
  • 02br 00He completed his education at the [department]of the [University].
  • He was studying at the chair of [chair].
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0Hi, I've made some corrections in bold and highlighted some other problems for you to fix. Some parts I could not really understand. You seem to have a big problem with article and preposition use, so you need to work on this to help you in future.02br
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00I am writing this reference letter 01b00regarding02b00 [name] . I have been [name] educator fo

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