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Tobolowsky Posted 17 years ago
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Could you give me your advice

Dear Friends,

Please,give me your kind advice about sintaxis of this text

Hence any diet will be dramatically more effective and its results will be more constant when it being used in combination with additional body-mind calming tools.



Thank you very much

Linda
  

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I have already done this once for you. Please do not double-post. Hence any diet will be dramatically more effective , and its results will be more reliable, when it is used in combination with additional body- and mind-calming tools.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have already done this once for you.
  • Please do not double-post.
  • Hence any diet will be dramatically more effective , and its results will be more reliable, when it is used in combination with additional body- and mind-calming tools.
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I have already done this once for you. Please do not double-post.

Hence any diet will be dramatically more effective, and its results will be more reliable, when it is used in combination with additional body- and mind-calming tools.
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