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Hi! My name is Santiago Semino, I write from Zoo-Luján in Argentina. I must send to print a leaflet containing a short text in English. I wrote it on my own, but since I’m not an English spoken native I would like someone have a look at it, just in case something does not make any sense. We’ll print thousands of it for English spoken tourist arriving to Argentina. PLEASE WOULD ANYONE BE SO KIND SO AS TO GIVE ME A HAND AND HAVE A QUICK LOOK AT IT????

ENGLISH

Luján, all the sensations within the same day.

Luján, where the mixture of Nature, History and Religion creates an unique place.

The monumental National Basilica. By entering the magnificence of its interior we accede to the world of its miracles.

The oldest streets and corners of the town lead us to colonial times; they conduct to the charm of the riverside where it was born.

We’ll live moments never imagined, uniques, we just need to try. The direct contact with the animals will teach us a lot about the real beauty of Nature.

The Transport Museum of the Zoo can connect us today with yesterday’s talents.

In this natural scene we’ll taste traditional meals.

During the whole day you’ll be accompanied by us in the discovery of each one of all these experiences.
  

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I know I'm being annoying, but could you send me a website so I can get a little more information. Some of these words have many meanings!

  • I know I'm being annoying, but could you send me a website so I can get a little more information.
  • Some of these words have many meanings!
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I know I'm being annoying, but could you send me a website so I can get a little more information. Some of these words have many meanings!
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hi peter, nature is great, though internet connection is tough. What do you think about this? Jam
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Hey Jam I don't know if you are the same person but I'll suppose you are.

Nature is great! Concerning the brochure above I'm getting different ideas about what the place actually is, You mentioned the word zoo so I thought it was a zoo.

Could you provide clear background material so I can help you edit the text in context?

you know, boring dry facts! Then I can help

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