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Domdom Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could you fix my wrong grammar and vocabulary, please?

It's been a while since I wrote here. I graduated from college last month. My sister bought me a laptop (or bought a laptop for me?). I was happy about it. From now I can study easily English with this. I started to work for three hours on weekdays at the shop as well in this month which I work at weekends for three hours on weekdays. Very short time. It was warm today. Spring is coming.
  

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It's been a while since I wrote here. I graduated from college last month. My sister bought me a laptop.

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  • It's been a while since I wrote here.
  • I graduated from college last month.
  • My sister bought me a laptop.
  • (My sister bought a laptop for me.
  • -Both are fine.
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It's been a while since I wrote here. I graduated from college last month. My sister bought me a laptop. (My sister bought a laptop for me. -Both are fine.). I was happy about that. (I was happy with it.) Now I can study English easily with this. I started to work for three hours on weekdays at the shop. as well in This month
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I was happy about that / with it.

Why isn't "about it" not good? it depends much on preposition?
Thank you!
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I was happy about that. = I was happy that my sister bought the laptop.
I was happy with it. = I liked the laptop. It made me happy.
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