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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Could you do proofreading?

I tranlated two Japanese articles into English . Could you correct tjhem if they don't make sense to you.?

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Unlike the Japanese who often do exchange of presents on various occasions, the English people seldom exchange gifts except on Christmas or on their birthdays. On the other hand, they often exchange cards.
Various things are sold at the card section in the stores. Also, the English people always have several kinds of cards at their home.
(NOTICE ) We are suppposed to use the following expressions .... exchange of presents, various things, and several kinds
on this article.
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Most English people living in the urban area want to spend relaxing time in the beautiful countryside by walking dogs or reading books for their old age.
They look very young for their age because they think their retirement as their best days on their life and they think positively that they get free time in which they can do whatever they want.

(NOTICE) We are supposed to use the following expressions.... for one's old age, think positively, and look young.

Thank you.
  

Top answer

Unlike the Japanese who often do exchange of presents on various occasions, the English people seldom exchange give gifts except on Christmas or on their birthdays. On the other hand, they often exchange cards. Various things are sold at the card section in the stores.

— Teechr

  • Unlike the Japanese who often do exchange of presents on various occasions, the English people seldom exchange give gifts except on Christmas or on their birthdays.
  • On the other hand, they often exchange cards.
  • Various things are sold at the card section in the stores.
  • Also, the English people always have several kinds of cards at their home.
  • Most English people living in the urban area s want to spend relaxing time relaxing in the beautiful countrysid e, by walking their dogs or reading books for their old age.
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Unlike the Japanese who often do exchange of presents on various occasions, the English people seldom exchange give gifts except on Christmas or on their birthdays. On the other hand, they often exchange cards.
Various things are sold at the card section in the stores. Also, the Eng
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Thank you very much for taking your time.

Also, the English people always have several kinds of cards at their home.

I revised the sentence above as follows.:

English people always have several kinds of cards to send on various occasion at home..

how do you feel about this revis
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Anonymous English people always have several kinds of cards at home to send on various occasion. at home..
Anonymous Don't you have any idea to use that expression in that sentence?
The "for" in "for their old age" suggests that they are planning ahead. For example, "Many people save part of their s
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