Could you do me favour? urgent & so serious for me!

Dear all,

I'm going to apply for a job which ask me to submit the competencies with evidence attached with my CV. I have written as much as i can but I am not satify that my English is so simple and some mistakes as this job vacancy is from one of the British Organization.

[K]I would be appreciate if you could check my English and edit for me and advice me if you have better idea in writing.
could you please do me favour as this is my big chance for me to get this job. I'm so serious about it.

Here is my writting below. Don't mind me hiding some words which is confidential for me....



Customer Service Orientation



I’ve got lots of experiences in customer services throughout my careers, as the receptionist in *** Bank for 7 years, as secretary in *** international Co. Ltd for 6 months and I have been working as the **Assistant at the present. On the other hand, my talent for personality, courteousness, thoughtful manner help me a lot to smooth my customer service skills in my job. According to my past and present experiences, I believe I can able to manage a large number of customers with different kind of services patiently and politely and with a smile even when I am under pressure from heavy member traffic at the counter. Apart from my counter duty task, I’m responsible for doing my job plan to meet target. Besides, I organise the ** Orientation session to deliver high quality services to the *** members. As I’m the (Oranization Name)* staff, I’m aware the implementation of corporate policies and initiative and have learnt **** guidance as well. So I have confident to be of service to (Department Name) as an Administrative Assistant or Assistant registrar.





Computer Knowledge skill



My current role as the **, all of my duty tasks in both job description and job plan are related to the computer skill. I’m responsible for check in / out the ** materials, putting new member data, making reservation for members through ** application software. Not only that, I also prepare some letters, forms, meeting minutes and table by using Microsoft application software when there is (NGO name**) meeting or staff meeting. In addition, I have been assigned by the Marketing and Communication Manager in updating the subscriber database for ** e-newsletter and formatting of English Language article, sport articles and new ** resources on ** Corporate website according to guidelines. And I’m also updating the ** activities monthly on ** webpage as well. In addition, I have created 86 new pages ** and put all the English Language articles on to the social network in order to deliver high quality service to member. As the result of my effort, there are increasing in number of visitors to ** Network. Besides, I organise the ** Orientation presentation monthly to educate members using Power Point attached with projector. With such knowledge and skill, I believe I can be of service as a ** Administrative Assistant or an Assistant Registrar by applying these skills necessary in this job.



Team Working



My own personality in willingly to make others feel comfortable help me a lot my career. All along from beginning of my career, as receptionist in **Bank to this current role as the ** Assistant, I have experiences alot about team working which is one of the crucial parts.

In my current role, I’m always willingly in helping my colleagues by covering their duty while they are out of office, putting some ideas if the ** team have new activities to organise and also putting my effort without any hesitations whenever there is a need in the (Place) or in the whole organization. In additional, I have never experience in arguing with colleagues throughout my career.

Thanks alot

Naked Chef!