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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing
could you do me a favor to improve the business letter?
Dear xxxx,
Good day. It has been long since you visit xxxxxx company, for expressing our appreciations and improving further service regarding your company’s needs and concerns,
my manager xxxx and I are planning to visit you in US during June 3th~ 7th at your convenience.
And I’d like take this opportunity to introduce myself as new sales representative, Overseas Sales Business of xxxxxxx Company.
As I’ll be assigned to US office and be directly responsible for global developing & sales affairs, I am keen to meet face to face with our key customers.
Please kindly let us know which date and time will be convenient for you ?
look forward to your reply
Sincerely,
Good day. It has been long since you visit xxxxxx company, for expressing our appreciations and improving further service regarding your company’s needs and concerns,
my manager xxxx and I are planning to visit you in US during June 3th~ 7th at your convenience.
And I’d like take this opportunity to introduce myself as new sales representative, Overseas Sales Business of xxxxxxx Company.
As I’ll be assigned to US office and be directly responsible for global developing & sales affairs, I am keen to meet face to face with our key customers.
Please kindly let us know which date and time will be convenient for you ?
look forward to your reply
Sincerely,
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Dear xxxx, Good day. It has been a while since you visited xxxxxx company. To express our appreciation and to improve our service regarding your company’s needs and concerns, my manager xxxx and I are planning to visit you in the US during the week of June 3th~ 7th at your convenience.
- Dear xxxx, Good day.
- It has been a while since you visited xxxxxx company.
- To express our appreciation and to improve our service regarding your company’s needs and concerns, my manager xxxx and I are planning to visit you in the US during the week of June 3th~ 7th at your convenience.
- I’d like take this opportunity to introduce myself as the new sales representative for overseas sales of xxxxxxx company.
- As I’ll be assigned to the US office and be directly responsible for global developing and sales affairs, I am keen to meet face to face with our key customers.
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Dear xxxx,
Good day. It has been a while since you visited xxxxxx company. To express our appreciation and to improve our service regarding your company’s needs and concerns, my manager xxxx and I are planning to visit you in the US during the week of June 3th~ 7th at your convenience.
I’d like take this opportunity to introduce myself as the new sales representative for oversea
Good day. It has been a while since you visited xxxxxx company. To express our appreciation and to improve our service regarding your company’s needs and concerns, my manager xxxx and I are planning to visit you in the US during the week of June 3th~ 7th at your convenience.
I’d like take this opportunity to introduce myself as the new sales representative for oversea
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Hello Sir, Please help me I know I am good in Writing a letter, please edit my work or maybe rephrase my letter. Thank you..
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This is to update your good office regarding our school burial activity at the Baguio Cemetery. Mr. ......., the caretaker of Baguio Cemetery told us that they couldn’t longer accommodate the school for our next burial activities because there is no vacant lot. How
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Anonymous:
This is to update your good office regarding our school burial activity at the Baguio Cemetery. Mr. ......., the caretaker of the Baguio Cemetery, told us that they could no longer accommodate the school for our next burial activity because there is no vacant lot. However, he suggested that he could assist us to develop a portion of a lot for this purpose. Based on their cost estima
This is to update your good office regarding our school burial activity at the Baguio Cemetery. Mr. ......., the caretaker of the Baguio Cemetery, told us that they could no longer accommodate the school for our next burial activity because there is no vacant lot. However, he suggested that he could assist us to develop a portion of a lot for this purpose. Based on their cost estima
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Anonymous Dear xxxx,Good day. It has been long since you visit xxxxxx company, for expressing our appreciations and improving further service regarding your company’s needs and concerns, my manager xxxx and I are planning to visit you in US during June 3th~ 7th at your convenience. And I’d like take this opportunity to introduce myself as new sales representative, Oversea
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