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Masanori Takaoka Posted 10 years ago
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​Could you correct this passage?

I think that the government should take place the activity in the nature. I'm sure that people come to appropriate the importance to protect the environments through it. Besides, it will bring rurals adequate money to use for conservations of environment, So, I should look to surruounings around me and approach the nature voluntarly.
  

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I don't understand all that you want to say, but perhaps it is this: The government should take an active part in the preservation of nature; in that way, people will come to appreciate the importance of protecting the environment. It will also bring adequate funds to rural areas for conservation. Then we will all be able to look at our surroundings and appreciate nature.

  • I don't understand all that you want to say, but perhaps it is this: The government should take an active part in the preservation of nature; in that way, people will come to appreciate the importance of protecting the environment.
  • It will also bring adequate funds to rural areas for conservation.
  • Then we will all be able to look at our surroundings and appreciate nature.
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I don't understand all that you want to say, but perhaps it is this:

The government should take an active part in the preservation of nature; in that way, people will come to appreciate the importance of protecting the environment. It will also bring adequate funds to rural areas for conservation. Then we will all be able to look at our surroundings and appreciate nature.

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