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Nithila Posted 17 years ago
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Originally Iron Ore lump size, from the site, is too big which can not accessible in to the GYRO Grinder. So it had to be broken into small piece by the Hammer. Subsequent output of lumps’ size should accessible to the GYRO Grinder. Result of GYRO grinder ground Ore lumps’ size should accessible to the TEMA Mill.
Size of ground sample each subsequent ground/broke
  

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The typical iron ore rocks from the site are too large to be put directly into the GYRO Grinder. ) into small pieces which can then be fed into the GYRO Grinder. The output from the GYRO grinder is fine enough to be fed into the TEMA Mill.

  • The typical iron ore rocks from the site are too large to be put directly into the GYRO Grinder.
  • ) into small pieces which can then be fed into the GYRO Grinder.
  • The output from the GYRO grinder is fine enough to be fed into the TEMA Mill.
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The typical iron ore rocks from the site are too large to be put directly into the GYRO Grinder. They have to be crushed first by the Hammer (mill?) into small pieces which can then be fed into the GYRO Grinder. The output from the GYRO grinder is fine enough to be fed into the TEMA Mill.

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