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People have different views on whether implementing severe punishments on driving offenders or upgrading the infrastructure is an effective method to cut down on traffic accidents. It is my belief that both measures should be taken in an attempt to restrict traffic accidents.

As a matter of fact, what the governments need to do is launching a good traffic control system in order to monitor and facilitate traffic flows on major roads for better and safer road usage. In addition, the authorities should also impose strict regulations on speed limit and on the amount of alcohol drivers absorbed before driving as a drunken driver is always a threat to road safety. Another way is to put wrongdoers on probation. As a result, they would probably obey the traffic laws and not re-offend.

Having said that, another alternative would be upgrading the infrastructure such as enhancing the roads, building a system of highways, bridges,…as run-down areas could lead to poor transport system. It is reasonable that the figures of authority make the most of tax revenue to build up cutting- edge and secure traffic system. However, the most important thing is raising the public’s awareness by some specific methods like police officers make a speech on public events, or teachers give lectures to students about the dangers of disobeying traffic laws and huge influences of traffic accidents.

In conclusion, while the general views have been differed among each individual, I strongly believe that all citizens throughout the world have certain responsibilities for tackling traffic issues by any possible method.