Could you correct this essay from a Japanese student?
These days you may see the CM of virtual currencies on TV or in a city more and more. I agree with this topic.
Virtual currencies do not need a wallet. If you go shopping, you just need a card or smartphone, when using the money. For example, at the station, you can do shopping so quickly because you do not search for your wallet and only touch a card on a smartphone. So, you do not need anxious for the train.
If you are stolen your wallet, it is difficult to back money from the stealer. However, virtual currencies enable us to back the money because you have a date of virtual currencies so you can stop to use the money.
Nowadays, many things are changed to digital, so money is changed to virtual currencies too.
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Masanori Takaoka These days you may see the CM of virtual currencies on TV or in a city more and more. This is not a good opening. What is "CM"?
- Masanori Takaoka These days you may see the CM of virtual currencies on TV or in a city more and more.
- This is not a good opening.
- What is "CM"?
- Abbreviations and acronyms must be spelled out or defined before they are used.
- What is virtual currency?
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Masanori TakaokaThese days you may see the CM of virtual currencies on TV or in a city more and more.
This is not a good opening.
What is "CM"? Abbreviations and acronyms must be spelled out or defined before they are used.
What is virtual currency? Can a CM be both on TV and in a city?
Masanori TakaokaI agree with t
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