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Tenacious Learner Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Could you correct this commentary on the very beginning of 'The Perfect Storm'

Hi teachers,
Could you correct this commentary on the very beginning of 'The Perfect Storm'.
The film takes place in Gloucester, a fishing town in Massachusetts. The fishermen arrive at the seaport and their families and friends have come to welcome them.
The boss's ships isn't very happy with the fish capture and doesn't pay much attention to the fishermen.

Thanks in advance.
  

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The film takes place in Gloucester, a fishing town in Massachusetts . The fishermen arrive at the seaport , where their families and friends have come to welcome them. The boss's ships ship captain ( ?

— CalifJim

  • The film takes place in Gloucester, a fishing town in Massachusetts .
  • The fishermen arrive at the seaport , where their families and friends have come to welcome them.
  • The boss's ships ship captain ( ?
  • ) isn't very happy with the catch and doesn't pay much attention to the fishermen.
  • ships isn't???
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The film takes place in Gloucester, a fishing town in Massachusetts. The fishermen arrive at the seaport, where their families and friends have come to welcome them. The boss's ships ship captain ( ? ) isn't very happy with the catch and doesn'
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CalifJimships isn't??? You know this one is wrong!
Hi Jim,
Thank you for your help. Yes I do, sorry.
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Thinking SpainI told her to rewrite this one because to me it doesn't make a lot of sense as a paragraph following the others, don't you think so?
I agree, but it depends on what comes next. Maybe she's going to continue with more of the story.

One of the ship captains goes to another place where there are more
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Hi Jim,
Thank you for your help and correction. Yes! She is going to continue. They have to watch a movie on their election, for ten minutes and write a commentary on it every week. I'll ask her about it and I'll let you know.
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Thinking SpainThey have to watch a movie on their election of their choice for ten minutes and write a commentary on it every week. I'll ask her about it and I'll let you know.
OK.

CJ
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