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Tenacious Learner Posted 14 years ago
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Could you correct these short paragraphs?

Hi teachers,
Could you correct these short paragraphs?
It’s very clear. But I think that she doesn't understand you or I think she doesn't read the mails, she goes very very accelerated. (I'm sure the underlined one is completely wrong.)

Another thing, how did it go on Friday? Can all the people attend the course? Montse is very happy and she liked it a lot.

What the person is trying to say with the underlined sentence is that 'she is always in a hurry, as a result she nevers pays attention to what she does, skipping over the things'.

Thanks in advance.
  

Top answer

Hi, Could you correct these short paragraphs? I t’s very clear. But I think that she doesn't understand you, or perhaps she doesn't read her emails.

— Clive

  • Hi, Could you correct these short paragraphs?
  • I t’s very clear.
  • But I think that she doesn't understand you, or perhaps she doesn't read her emails.
  • She's always in a hurry.
  • Another thing, how did it go on Friday?
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Hi,

Could you correct these short paragraphs?
It’s very clear. But I think that she doesn't understand you, or perhaps she doesn't read her emails. She's always in a hurry.

Another thing, how did it go on
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Hi Clive,
Thank you so much for you reply.

TS
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