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Messier42 Posted 13 years ago
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Could you correct them?

. Could you correct them?

The neckline became too loose/saggy after wearing it for more than 5 years.

She wore the skirt with the upper cothes tucked in the skirt. I was thinking that she would look nicer with leaving the shirt untucked. So, I told her she needs to bring thr shirt out of the skirt.

Is convoluted used too? Is it fine to use?

Do you know some more expression about clothes exprssion? Eg) how a person look like with a clothes on or how the clothes look like~
  

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The neckline became too loose/saggy after wearing it for more than 5 years. You should mention what the neckline is a part of. The sentence sounds as though you wore a neckline for five years.

  • The neckline became too loose/saggy after wearing it for more than 5 years.
  • You should mention what the neckline is a part of.
  • The sentence sounds as though you wore a neckline for five years.
  • She wore the skirt with the upper c l othes tucked in the skirt.
  • I was thinking that she would look nicer with leaving the shirt untucked.
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The neckline became too loose/saggy after wearing it for more than 5 years.
You should mention what the neckline is a part of. The sentence sounds as though you wore a neckline for five years.

She wore the skirt with the upper c
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Convoluted means coiled or twisted up, or intricate and complicated. I don't think it would often be a word applied to how someone wears their clothes. If a woman wore her hair in a very ornate and interwoven style I suppose you might describe it as convoluted.
Some expressions:
He is a picture of sartorial elegance.
She looks like a million dollars.
He's dressed like
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The neckline of my shirt became too loose/saggy after wearing it for more than 5 years.
Is this better ? Can 'saggy' and 'loose' be usable in this sentence? What about 'shabby'?
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Thank you for your reply!Emotion: smile
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Could you help me with this sentence.
If someone wears pants too many years, the spot on which knees meets get stuck out. How do you describe it, using better and suitable expression.
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Yes and yes. Saggy, loose and shabby could all be used to describe your shirt collar.
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A common phrase is baggy knees.
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Thank you for your reply.
Can I also say 'your knee on your pants stuck out/protruded'?
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Can I also say 'your knee on your pants stuck out/protruded'?
You could, but it would sound very odd.
The phrase "his pants were out at the knees" would indicate that his pants were worn through at the knees and there

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