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Masanori Takaoka Posted 10 years ago
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Could you correct the short essay?

The tile is "What do you consider most valuable in your future life?"

The value of a guide to my future is justice. For example, not to tell a lie or to be kind to other people. It is important to do things other people regard as right as well as I think so. Sometimes, cheating on other people makes much money or big fame, but justice makes my future happier eventually.
  

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The value of a guide to my future is justice. ) I will live my future life according to the principle of justice. I value justice as the most important principle to guide my future life.

  • The value of a guide to my future is justice.
  • ) I will live my future life according to the principle of justice.
  • I value justice as the most important principle to guide my future life.
  • For example, not to tell a lie or to be kind to other people.
  • ) It is important to do things other people ( ,as well as I, ) regard as right as well as I think so .
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The value of a guide to my future is justice. (This sentence does not make any sense.)

I will live my future life according to the principle of justice.
I value justice as the most important principle to guide my future life.

For example, not to tell a lie or to be kind to other people. (That is not a complete sentence.)

It is important

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