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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Could you correct the incorrect or unnatural points in sentence below?

Prior to the next meeting, we would like to share the result of correspondence with our client.

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, that correspondence which occurred between our client and us? Or are you talking about 'sharing (something) with our client'? It's unclear, because both "share" and "correspondence" can take a with -phrase.

— CalifJim

  • , that correspondence which occurred between our client and us?
  • Or are you talking about 'sharing (something) with our client'?
  • It's unclear, because both "share" and "correspondence" can take a with -phrase.
  • It's also unclear what 'the result of correspondence' would be.
  • Do you mean actions taken?
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Are you talking about 'correspondence with our client', i.e., that correspondence which occurred between our client and us? Or are you talking about 'sharing (something) with our client'? It's unclear, because both "share" and "correspondence" can take a with-phrase. It's also unclear what 'the result of correspondence' would be. Do you mean actions taken? The sentence contains so litt
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Thank you for your reply!
As you pointed out, it is unclear.
I mean to say to my colleague that "I inform you of the detail which was discussed with our client."
I'd like to know what is the best expression in this case.
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AnonymousPrior to the next meeting, we would like to share the result of correspondence with our client.
I inform you of the detail which was discussed with our client.
Combining the ideas in your two sentences, I think you are trying to say something like this:

Prior to the next meeting, I would like to share with you the details of a discussi
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