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Tenacious Learner Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Could you correct Paragraph B , please?
Hi teachers,
Could you correct paragraph B please? I have posted 'Paragraph A' just to know the beginning of the plot of 'El Dorado'.
Paragraph A
In 1519 in a Spanish port , Herman Cortes is ready to travel to The New World. In another part of the city, two men, Julio and Miguel, who are wanted by the police, are playing with fake dice. Suddenly, the police find them, but they run away and hide in one of Cortes' ships.
Pararagraph B
But the police finally find them and are taking to jail. During their time in prison there’s only one idea in their minds, escaping. At last they escape on a boat and after a long and hard travel, they arrive in El Dorado.
Thanks in advance.
Could you correct paragraph B please? I have posted 'Paragraph A' just to know the beginning of the plot of 'El Dorado'.
Paragraph A
In 1519 in a Spanish port , Herman Cortes is ready to travel to The New World. In another part of the city, two men, Julio and Miguel, who are wanted by the police, are playing with fake dice. Suddenly, the police find them, but they run away and hide in one of Cortes' ships.
Pararagraph B
But the police finally find them and are taking to jail. During their time in prison there’s only one idea in their minds, escaping. At last they escape on a boat and after a long and hard travel, they arrive in El Dorado.
Thanks in advance.
Top answer
Well, I hope that your responder fixed Hernan and loaded dice . But the police finally find them again and take them to jail. During their time in prison there’s only one idea in their minds : escape .
- Well, I hope that your responder fixed Hernan and loaded dice .
- But the police finally find them again and take them to jail.
- During their time in prison there’s only one idea in their minds : escape .
- At last they escape on a boat and after a long, hard journey , they arrive in El Dorado.
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Well, I hope that your responder fixed Hernan and loaded dice.
But the police finally find them again and take them to jail. During their time in prison there’s only one idea in their minds: escape. At last they escape on a boat and after a long, hard journey, they arrive in El Dorado.
But the police finally find them again and take them to jail. During their time in prison there’s only one idea in their minds: escape. At last they escape on a boat and after a long, hard journey, they arrive in El Dorado.
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Mister MicawberWell, I hope that your responder fixed Hernan and loaded dice.Hi Mister Micawber,
Thank you for your correction, but I have never seen the expression 'loaded dice'.
I did some research and I found these two definitions. Do they apply?
a) Loaded dice have small weights in them that determine how they land. Used in gambling, they allo
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Mister MicawberYes, A is what I think you mean.Hi Mister Micawber,
Thank you for your reply.
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