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Masanori Takaoka Posted 10 years ago
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The Internet is sometimes criticized as “a nest of rumors” because there are a lot of irresponsible statements and false information there. Considering how the Internet works as a media, however, it is not so easy to agree with this idea.

As the Internet is widely used, the way of giving and receiving information, which used to be about mass media, will change and then we will have different types of human relationships or social structure.
  

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The Internet is sometimes criticized as “a nest of rumors” because it disseminates a lot of irresponsible statements and false information. Considering how the Internet works as a medium, however, it is not so easy to agree with this opinion. As the Internet is more widely used, the way of giving and receiving information, which used to be about mass media, will change, and human relationships or social structure will change with it .

  • The Internet is sometimes criticized as “a nest of rumors” because it disseminates a lot of irresponsible statements and false information.
  • Considering how the Internet works as a medium, however, it is not so easy to agree with this opinion.
  • As the Internet is more widely used, the way of giving and receiving information, which used to be about mass media, will change, and human relationships or social structure will change with it .
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The Internet is sometimes criticized as “a nest of rumors” because it disseminates a lot of irresponsible statements and false information. Considering how the Internet works as a medium, however, it is not so easy to agree with this opinion.

As the Internet is more widely used, the way of giving and receiving information, which used to be about mass media, will change, and huma

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