Could you correct my writing, please?

Hi!

I would be very thankful if anyone could correct my writing. And some comments about my writing would be great.

Task:



My letter:

Dear Mrs Davies,

I am writing to ask more information about the advertisement offering a job in a pub or hotel.
Firstly, it is said in the advertisement that the workplace is in England. I would be very thankful if you could tell me the exact location.
Secondly, you mentioned in the advertisement that one can work in a high quality placement. Could you tell me what is the exact position? In addition, I would like to know when and how long a person has to work.
Thirdly, could you tell me the range of the salary for a person working in that position?
Furthermore, in the advertisement it is stated that the accommodation is provided. What is the cost of that?
I am looking forward hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,
Mari Mets