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MAJAVAN Posted 19 years ago
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Recently, I resolved to turn to me each time I've got troubles. I've understood that the world is a reflection of what I am really, and not of what I believe I am. All the compenents of my life is like all the components in myself.
So, each time my heart aches, I don't look for an external cause anymore, I don't accuse someone anymore, I don't mull over who is right or who is wrong anymore. I look for the wound in me. And I don't try to suppress my pain, I take it on and I suffer all that I have to suffer.
It's not a punishment that I inflict to myself. I just don't want to hide myself anymore. Indeed, I used to fear my own judgment... But now, the pain affects me without affecting me.
Please help me to correct this text if there are some mistakes.
Thank you in advance !
Recently, I resolved to turn to me each time I've got troubles. I've understood that the world is a reflection of what I am really, and not of what I believe I am. All the compenents of my life is like all the components in myself.
So, each time my heart aches, I don't look for an external cause anymore, I don't accuse someone anymore, I don't mull over who is right or who is wrong anymore. I look for the wound in me. And I don't try to suppress my pain, I take it on and I suffer all that I have to suffer.
It's not a punishment that I inflict to myself. I just don't want to hide myself anymore. Indeed, I used to fear my own judgment... But now, the pain affects me without affecting me.
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