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Lucas21c Posted 17 years ago
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Could you correct my sentences?

I think there might be some errors. If so, please correct them. Thanks.

The place where Chris Gueffroy had tried to escapr over the Berlin Wall, become now a Park. Here are strollers and cyclists out. A memorial remember a young man who was shot as the last victiom at the Berlin Wall. The Senator of Berlin let him stand up in June 2003, for his 35th birthday.
  

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The place where Chris Gueffroy had tried to escape over the Berlin Wall has now become a park, where strollers and cyclists promenade. There is a statue memorializing the young man , the last victim shot at the Berlin Wall. It was erected by the Berlin Senate in June 2003 for his 35th birthday.

  • The place where Chris Gueffroy had tried to escape over the Berlin Wall has now become a park, where strollers and cyclists promenade.
  • There is a statue memorializing the young man , the last victim shot at the Berlin Wall.
  • It was erected by the Berlin Senate in June 2003 for his 35th birthday.
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The place where Chris Gueffroy had tried to escape over the Berlin Wall has now become a park, where strollers and cyclists promenade. There is a statue memorializing the young man, the last victim shot at the Berlin Wall. It was erected by the Berlin Senate in June 2003 for his 35th birthday.

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