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Myheartismelting Posted 7 years ago
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Could you correct my sentence? I think it's not a good sentence.
Our objectives in this project are to define the term “Internet of Things”, give some example of IoT’s applications and point out its pros and cons.
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To me, this sounds more like an essay than a project. But you say 'our objectives '. In what sense is this a project?
- To me, this sounds more like an essay than a project.
- But you say 'our objectives '.
- In what sense is this a project?
- pros and cons does not sound formal enough.
- Say eg Our objectives in this project are to define the term “Internet of Things”, give some examples of its application s, and discuss its benefits and drawbacks.
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To me, this sounds more like an essay than a project. But you say 'our objectives'. In what sense is this a project?
pros and cons does not sound formal enough.
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eg Our objectives in this project are to define the term “Internet of Things”, give some examples of its applications, and discuss its benefits and d
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