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Smilingjenia Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Could you correct my sentence

Hello! could you correct my sentence:

In order to meet the requirements of registration for students from outside EEA countries I sent my application form and handling fee payment with my previous letter in December. With this letter I also enclosed its copy.

I am going to write it in my cover letter but I'm not sure about if it's correct!
Thank you very much!
  

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Hi Jenia, I would say it this way: I sent my application form and handling fee payment with my letter in December in order to meet the registration requirements for students who are outside EEA countires . I am also enclosing a copy with this letter. TrysB

  • Hi Jenia, I would say it this way: I sent my application form and handling fee payment with my letter in December in order to meet the registration requirements for students who are outside EEA countires .
  • I am also enclosing a copy with this letter.
  • TrysB
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Hi Jenia,
I would say it this way:

I sent my application form and handling fee payment with my letter in December in order to meet the registration requirements for students who are outside EEA countires. I am also enclosing a copy with this letter.

TrysB

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