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Tintincutesy Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Could you correct my grammar please

Hi

is my sentence correct:

You can at any time verify if Mproduct connects to your B system without problem.
  

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Hi, is my sentence correct: You can at any time verify if Mproduct connects to your B system without problem. I wouldn't say it's wrong, but it sounds odd and awkward. I suggest this.

  • Hi, is my sentence correct: You can at any time verify if Mproduct connects to your B system without problem.
  • I wouldn't say it's wrong, but it sounds odd and awkward.
  • I suggest this.
  • At any time, you can verify that Mproduct is connecting to your B system successfully.
  • Clive
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Hi,

is my sentence correct:

You can at any time verify if Mproduct connects to your B system without problem.

I wouldn't say it's wrong, but it sounds odd and awkward.


I suggest this.
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I have another one:

Instead of entering manually the details of a B system, you may import it using the X file already existing on your computer.

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I know this sounds awkward and I tried to re-structure the sentence into this:

You may import the details of a B ystem using the X file, whic
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Hi,
I have another one:

Instead of entering manually the details of a B system, you may import it using the X file already existing on your computer.

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I know this sounds awkward and I tried to re-structure the sentence into this:

You may i
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the details of B system
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Hi,

You mean a detailed description of the B system?

Clive
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Hi,

You may import the details of a B system using the X file which already exists on your computer. By doing this, you can avoid entering them manually.

Do you mean 'the X file' or 'a file in the X format'?

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ok, sorry for the confusion.
This is the sentence

Instead of entering manually the details of B system, you may import it (details of B system) using the XFile which already exist on your computer
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Hi,
Instead of entering manually the details of B system, you may import them (details of B system) using the XFile which already exists on your computer.

Clive

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