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Topic: Write an artical about the area where you live, describe your area, explain the advantages and disadvantages of living there and suggest at least one improvement you would like to see.

Vinh city is a peaceful place to live. This is a small and quiet city where everyone in the neighborhood know each other. There is a lot of advantage living in a place like this. Firstly, in this city you won't have to worry about the traffic jams which happen every day in big cities, because the city's population density is low. Secondly, due to small population size, you won't have to worry about the environmental pollution or the price of goods and service, things are always clean and cheap. At day, people go to work since early in the morning, while at night, they go to the center square or the cinema, relax and forget about the works encumbered them all day. Life is tranquil in a small city like this. Regard all the advantages, there are a few drawbacks living here. Some people might find this place quite boring and lack of energy. Some might also say that their privacy is infringed on due to the curiosity of their neighbors. I have to say that you won some you lose some, nothing is perfect. In the future, I would like to see this city be more modern, more dynamic.