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Musica Posted 17 years ago
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Could you correct my essay please :) many thanks
a)Is education loosing its value?
Education is a crucial process which has accepted universally. However some people think that it is worthless to spend millions and time in order get a degree.In this essay,i will look at some of arguments for and against the importance of education.
To begin with,opponents who think increased level of education is unnecessary,believe that it has lost its value.In the past,educated people had more respect about themselves but now,they are suspicious about it.Because education has become a luxury and everyone can have it easily.Secondly, for some people, education prevent independent thinking ways and restrict the felxibility.They claim that a lot of brillant people has shaped our life without completing their education.Such as Einstein,Bill Gates,Edison.They were both weak in education but successful in their proffession.
However,education supporters believe that a sufficiant education and a well-eaned degree can open the doors for a better life.I feel strongly that this positive aspect will pursue lots of people.The qualifications people acquire through the education are a proof to be able get a job.The skills they have gained will impress the employers.And all this positive development will make them adaptable and flexible in competitive job market.
In addition,well educated people are very precious for the country.They can help to improve the countrys economy and it would attract foreign investment.
In conclusion,eventhough opponents think that education has become less important and devalued, it still maintains its invaluable position and increace its importance.
Education is a crucial process which has accepted universally. However some people think that it is worthless to spend millions and time in order get a degree.In this essay,i will look at some of arguments for and against the importance of education.
To begin with,opponents who think increased level of education is unnecessary,believe that it has lost its value.In the past,educated people had more respect about themselves but now,they are suspicious about it.Because education has become a luxury and everyone can have it easily.Secondly, for some people, education prevent independent thinking ways and restrict the felxibility.They claim that a lot of brillant people has shaped our life without completing their education.Such as Einstein,Bill Gates,Edison.They were both weak in education but successful in their proffession.
However,education supporters believe that a sufficiant education and a well-eaned degree can open the doors for a better life.I feel strongly that this positive aspect will pursue lots of people.The qualifications people acquire through the education are a proof to be able get a job.The skills they have gained will impress the employers.And all this positive development will make them adaptable and flexible in competitive job market.
In addition,well educated people are very precious for the country.They can help to improve the countrys economy and it would attract foreign investment.
In conclusion,eventhough opponents think that education has become less important and devalued, it still maintains its invaluable position and increace its importance.
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, getting a degree) but I believe the question is more toward education as whole, not necessarily a degree. Chris
- , getting a degree) but I believe the question is more toward education as whole, not necessarily a degree.
- Chris
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Your essay is discussing more on the merits of higher education (i.e., getting a degree) but I believe the question is more toward education as whole, not necessarily a degree.
Chris
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