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成海成海 Posted 4 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Introduce Myself

I would like to introduce myself. My name is Kaisei Yoshii. I was born in Hyogo, and I had lived there for about 19 years. I am a third student and majoring Electrical and Electronic Engineering. I was a member of the student council in junior high school. I discussed the issues in our school with the other members and we worked together to resolve the problem and I have many other experiences working in groups. So, I will make the best use of it for research in university.

  

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I had lived there for about 19 years. Where do you live now? I am a third studen t, and majoring Electrical and Electronic Engineering.

  • I had lived there for about 19 years.
  • Where do you live now?
  • I am a third studen t, and majoring Electrical and Electronic Engineering.
  • I discussed the various issues in our school with the other members and we worked together to resolve th os e proble ms.
  • I will make the best use of it for research in university.
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???? I had lived there for about 19 years.

Where do you live now?

????I am a third student, and majoring Electrical and Electronic Engineering.
????I discussed the various issues in our

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