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I would like to introduce myself. My name is Soshi Hirayae. I am from Koshi city in Kumamoto. I did many activities in nature such as fishing, shell gathering, gathering wild plants to eat and gathering bamboo shoots. However, I prefer to spend time indoors than out. Therefore, all my hobbies are indoor activities. Such as watching movies, playing video games, reading books, crafting electronics. In the future, I want to be an engineer and be involved in the latest technology. I must use English to be involved in latest technology. So, I want to study English hard. This concludes my introduction. Let’s work together.
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awrb5436gathering wild plants to eat and gathering bamboo shoots.
Considering that bamboo shoots are gathered and eaten in Japan, it would be simpler to write the yellow part as including bamboo shoots.
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