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Aevb2768 Posted 4 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could you correct my essay?

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I would like to introduce myself. My name is Ittetsu Miyazato. I’m from Okinawa. I’m 20 years old, and a university student, majoring electrical engineering. I belonged to a volunteer group when I was a high school student. There were a lot of attempts, for example, working on product development with companies in our town, hosting a play, interacting with high school students from other areas. Those experiences are treasure of my life. In the future, there is not my plan. I could get easy job. This is the end to introduce for my self-introduce. I would be happy if you knew me.

  

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aevb2768 My Stack aevb2768 There were a lot of attempts, aevb2768 hosting a play aevb2768 there is not my plan. aevb2768 I could get easy job What do the above parts mean? Reword them if possible.

  • aevb2768 My Stack aevb2768 There were a lot of attempts, aevb2768 hosting a play aevb2768 there is not my plan.
  • aevb2768 I could get easy job What do the above parts mean?
  • Reword them if possible.
  • Also, who are you writing that introduction for?
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aevb2768My Stack
aevb2768There were a lot of attempts,
aevb2768hosting a play
aevb2768there is not my plan.
aevb2768I could get easy job

What do the above parts mean? Reword them if possible.

Also, who are

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