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The Goal of My Life
I would like to introduce myself. My name is Kubo Kyohe. I will write about my thoughts on the meaning of life. I enjoyed only studying and club activity till high school , and there was little time to think about the target of my life. So, when I entered this university, I thought about, what I am, what I can, what my life is, and so on. One day, I noticed that intense emotions burst when I saw information about social problems. The problem I particularly pay attention to is the issue of poverty in Japan. Currently, I help
children to play and study in a facility for developmental disabilities support. It is just small impact on society, but I will do it that if there are people to be happy. Would you like to do such an activity together?
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I would like to introduce myself. My name is Kubo Kyohe. I will write about my thoughts on the meaning of life.
- I would like to introduce myself.
- My name is Kubo Kyohe.
- I will write about my thoughts on the meaning of life.
- I enjoyed only studying and club activity till high schoo l, and there was little time to think about the target of my life goals, s o when I entered started at this university, I thought abou t w hat I am, what I can do , what my life is about , and so on.
- One day, I noticed that intense emotions had burst in me when I saw information read about about certain social problem s, and in particular, The problem I particularly pay attention to is the issue of poverty in Japan.
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I would like to introduce myself. My name is Kubo Kyohe. I will write about my thoughts on the meaning of life. I enjoyed only studying and club activity till high school, and there was little time to think about the target of my life goals, s
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