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I would like to introduce myself. My name is Tomoki Yamasaki. I am from Kasuga in Fukuoka. I work as a cram school teacher. My hobby is traveling and taking pictures. I like taking picture of nature when I go travel. I have already traveled six times and took picture of the beautiful sight. My dream is to be an engineer. The trigger that I have the dream was to see flight training of Self-Defence Force. I am sure to come true the dream by studying at Kyushu of Institute of technology.
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I would like to introduce myself. My name is Tomoki Yamasaki. I am from Kasuga in Fukuoka.
- I would like to introduce myself.
- My name is Tomoki Yamasaki.
- I am from Kasuga in Fukuoka.
- I work as a cram school teacher.
- My hobby is traveling and taking pictures.
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I would like to introduce myself. My name is Tomoki Yamasaki. I am from Kasuga in Fukuoka. I work as a cram school teacher. My hobby is traveling and taking pictures. I like taking pictures of nature when I [ 1] go travel. I have already traveled [ 2] six times and took picture of [ 3]
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